Editing Services
You Don’t Need a Query Consult
It's easy to assume you need a query consult when you're struggling to get an agent's attention. In my experience, though, the query is often just a symptom of a larger problem: the manuscript itself isn't yet doing what it needs to do.
That's why I offer both manuscript consults and developmental edits.
Manuscript Consults
A manuscript consult is a big-picture assessment of your work. I'll identify what's working, what's not, and where I believe your revision efforts should be focused. Think of it as a professional diagnosis designed to help you understand the manuscript's strengths and weaknesses before you invest time in revision.
Developmental Edits
A developmental edit goes much deeper. In addition to identifying problem areas, I'll provide detailed guidance for revision, including feedback on plot, pacing, character arcs, stakes, worldbuilding, scene structure, subplots, narrative tension, and theme. The goal is not simply to identify issues, but to offer specific guidance that will help you strengthen the manuscript as a whole.
These are two very different services because writers need different kinds of support. Sometimes you need an in-depth roadmap for revision. Sometimes you simply need an experienced publishing professional to point you in the right direction.
Book Coaching
Book coaching is designed for writers who want ongoing support while drafting or revising a manuscript.
Think of it as having an experienced publishing professional in your corner throughout the writing process. Coaching sessions can include brainstorming, problem-solving, accountability check-ins, revision guidance, and feedback designed to keep your project moving forward.
Whether you're struggling to finish a first draft, working through a difficult revision, or simply looking for accountability, coaching provides personalized one-on-one support tailored to your goals.
Copyediting / Line Editing
Once the big-picture work is complete, it's time to polish the manuscript at the sentence level.
Copyediting and line editing focus on clarity, consistency, style, grammar, punctuation, and readability. I'll help ensure your manuscript is clean, professional, and ready for submission or publication.
This service is ideal for writers who have already refined their story and are looking for a final editorial pass before sending their work out into the world.
Rates
I prefer to offer project-based quotes rather than hourly rates.
Project fees are determined by manuscript length, the level of editorial support requested, and the overall scope of the project. For book coaching, I offer monthly rates based on the frequency of consultations (weekly, biweekly, etc.).
If you'd like to discuss your project, feel free to fill out the form below or get in touch through my contact page.
Testimonial
Holly is a publishing pro! Her reviews of my novels are always timely and thoughtful, and she draws on years of experience as an award-winning author to provide insightful assessments of my work that ultimately strengthen my manuscripts. – Jen Doktorski, YA author